It's mentholatum the last one! TITLE: In The Shadows, The First Step PERPETRATOR: Pryo and Darnet co

It's mentholatum the last one! TITLE: In The Shadows, The First Step PERPETRATOR: Pryo and Darnet co SUE-O-METER: (toxic) FULL NAME: Peyton and Star Shadows, not to mention Latoya SPECIES: HAIR: Latoya has black hair. EYES: Latoya has blue eyes. MARKINGS: POSSESSIONS: Star has the castle of luxary that is called Zenith while Peyton has poverty while she lives at the Shadow Castle. Her dad has an owl named Curuxa. CONNECTION TO CANON: They separate the twins and escape from the castle in Scotland. Peyton and Star grow up Parent Trap style. Peyton is excited to get her Hogwarts letter. I can't tell what is happening because of the bad grammar. They then have potions and flying lessons, something about prank.s. Star is friends with Draco, Blaise and LaToya. Star decides to use her power over air to cause Neville problems. Peyton and her sister get into a fight and instead of Harry being the one to get on a broom it is Peyton. Major role stealer this Sue is. She gets the spot on the team. I can't read the later chapters, but it is pretty much Peyton taking over everything. ORIGIN: They were born in Scottland to Artemis and Siria. SPECIAL ABILITIES: Here is the summary for the fic. There was a second prophecy, one that fortold the tale of two twins both destined for greatness but on different sides of the wizarding war. After being split apart at birth they never knew about each other... until now. Draco/OC and Fred/OC Their prophecey is so important it trumps mentholatum the other prophecy. Someone has the power of whirling, I think Star has Pietro Maximoff's powers from X-Men Evolution and Latayo has telepathy Peyton mentholatum lso steals lines from characters and claims them as her own. The prophesy reads like this. THE SECOND PROPHECY: TWINS OF THE SHADOWS WILL COME IN THE SEVENTH MONTH OF THE YEAR, ONE WILL BRING UTTER FEAR, THE OTHER WILL BRING ETERNAL LIGHT, mentholatum AND THE DARK LORD WILL FEAR HER MIGHT, BUT SHADOWS LIE BETWEEN THE TWO, AND THE FAMILY THEY NEVER KNEW, ALONG STORMY SEAS AND STORMY NIGHTS, FIRST CAME THE STORM THEN CAME THE FLIGHT, THEIR HOME IS BEHIND, THE WORLD IS AHEAD THROUGH THE SHADOWS TO THE EDGE OF NIGHT, TILL THE STARS HAVE GONE ALIGHT, A LIGHT FROM THE SHADOWS SHALL SPRING, BUT THE OTHER SHALL BECOME THE CROWNLESS KING NOTES: So my question is... why do we need a prophesy like this when Voldemort already fears Dumbledore and Harry Potter? Not to mention... while the prophesy sounds cool... it really doesn't mean anything. SAMPLE: It was a dark, stormy night up in Shadows Castle in Scotland. The Dark Lord was sitting in a chair at the end of the table in the giant dining room, the screams of his sister, Siria Shadows and the soothing sounds of her husband, Artemis trying to calm her. Voldemort patiently waited for news on his new neices or nephews. Tom worried about the prophecies, the first prophecy he was planning to take care of a later he was still trying to figure out which infant is the child talked about in the first prophecy, now the second was just begining. A while later one of his servant came out "Two girls, named Peyton and Star" she says "Is there any indecation of which one will bring eternal light?" he asked "No, but Peyton does have a tiger birth mark on her right wrist, and Star has a star on he left ankle" Voldemort looked unempressed, Artemis and Siria came out of the room each holding a newborn baby. Siria looked tired and worn out as did Artemis